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Tuesday 1 March 2016

Using DRAFT In Our Writing

This is my stretched sentence. We made our sentence first then we changed them using DRAFT

Before I used DRAFT
Who - The small dog barked.
What - The small dog barked loudly.
When - At midnight the small dog barked loudly.
Where - At midnight the small dog barked loudly in the back yard.
Why - As the clock struck midnight the small dog barked loudly in the backyard, at an intruder coming through the gate.

When I used DRAFT
At midnight the small dog barked loudly, at the intruder coming through the rattling and rusted iron gate.

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